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TFA: Zoe by ~Chulala:iconChulala:



SHORT prologue

The Zonal Omnidirectional Ersatz or Zoe for short  was an experimetal advanced battle system A.I for the new plane modles of the future, where the pilots are connected to the plane and dose not require controling devices like past plane designs, it's fully automated and controled by the pilots mind and movement and the A.I will be used as a guiding and monitoring system.

Zoe came to be when the plane was being flight tested at far from where Prime and co. were fighting megatron, when the allspark was dispersed into many pieces, spreading all over th country, a shard went right into the experimental planes computer core, causing it to malfunction and electrocuted the pilot and killing him in the end.
The project was delayed for repairs then abandonned and was placed in storage because of dangerous reasons.

Zoe then later started up itself, she questions her reason and purpose, leaving the storage house to find her own answers then later was confronted by the Autobots.
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A totally altered story.

Note: this was made up by me and my brother, when we were discussing an introduction for Zoe, this started out as a prototype then was scrapped in the end but later was brought up after remodifiying her designs for the final time.
Her profile you read in Zoe 0.2 was thought up by me alone because that time I wasn't familiar with the adventure nor the characters yet

This is the re-edited story plot after watching megatron's rising ^^
I hope there won't be any weird typos around <<;;;

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~gaby264:icongaby264: Apr 12, 2008, 11:15:46 AM
that story must be great about zoe

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~Chulala:iconChulala: Apr 12, 2008, 11:49:45 AM
Thanks ^^
I thought it was considered to be mary-sueish because of the whole idea of a character questioning about about "why" and "what's my purpose" thing.
~gaby264:icongaby264: Apr 12, 2008, 12:18:15 PM
your welcome ^^- :hug:

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